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Cream of Crop Showers

“Let the rain kiss you. Let the rain beat upon your head with silver liquid drops. Let the rain sing you a lullaby.” —Langston Hughes Cream of Crop Showers The world seems smaller, inside within quarters, no sun. But the yellow wonder is like lightning outside, not done. Inside there is the brightness of the youngest grand. Consuming all the rays of sunshine, each grain of sand. The community park would burn within minutes our skin, so the schoolager finds friends, swings his arms to win. The VR helps a bit on closeted days that aren’t cooled by rain. Those greedy clouds won’t spill their shimmering champagne. With “cream of crop” showers, I imagine us stomping, making pies with mud, running through the streets, splashing, loving the rise. Dare the lightning to strike, we’d grab our swords and fight. We’d reduce its commotion locomotion to a wee little light. All wet, with flip flops flying like frisbees into puddles deep. We’d be like fish, who don’t care if they’re slippery, and leap. The skies today hold promise, covering over the brightness. Will the heavens lie to us today or do they hold forthrightness.

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Date: 7/22/2024 6:35:00 AM
How children do love the rain and splashing in the puddles, the wetter they get the happier they are. We also need rain in Johannesburg, lets see what surprises our summer will bring. You write beautifully, this poem is really lovely Kim. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2024 2:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jennifer!
Date: 7/19/2024 2:25:00 PM
I guess as Langston Hughes said above rain is only what you make of it. If you look forward to its appearance and enjoy it falling to the earth, then it isn't so bad. Reads like you had fun in the rain. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2024 3:11:00 PM
When we get too much or too little then it is hard. Thank you, Sara! Hughes said it well. :)
Date: 7/18/2024 11:19:00 PM
A great rhyming take on the beauty of rain, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2024 6:59:00 AM
Thanks, Subimal! :)
Date: 7/18/2024 8:12:00 PM
remarkably penned as the heat saturates the earth...we all gir rain here as well, Kim...a treasure this is!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2024 6:59:00 AM
Thank you, Nette! I appreciate your visit!
Date: 7/18/2024 6:20:00 PM
gee all we seem to have is dull grey skies and rainy weather, well penned Kim:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2024 7:05:00 PM
In Georgia we are hoping for more rain. Hope you get some sunshine, Jan! ((hugs))
Date: 7/18/2024 1:33:00 PM
I loved the last line, Kim- what a way to complete! It's been raining and raining here the last few days...the sun is out right now, through clouds..."The world seems smaller, inside within quarters, no sun" a real image, Kim. <3 Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2024 2:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! xx
Date: 7/18/2024 12:16:00 PM
Its been raining here a lot.. but we have sunshine today.. Your poem rhymes and flows really well..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2024 2:29:00 PM
Thank you, my friend ((hugs))
Date: 7/18/2024 9:56:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your rain write. We need rain here. Send some over. Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2024 11:07:00 AM
And a few mins ago started raining…yay!

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