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Crazy Woman

Crazy Woman Vilanelle Do not tell her that romance is a lie; silver prince will come to save her from gloom- over her gray hair, white doves swiftly fly A true believer, she never asked why million roses died before they bloomed; do not tell her that romance is a lie she pretends she hasn't seen herself cry; recollecting her lost love, unresumed- over her gray hair, white doves swiftly fly Helium hope's flashing from the sky; stars reveal one's fate- or so she assumed- do not tell her that romance is a lie Cynics despise such dreams she lives by; time after time, tin loves end in tombs- over her gray hair, white doves swiftly fly Despite bitter facts she'd still love to try; waiting nervously in her frosty room- do not tell her that romance is a lie; over her gray hair, white doves swiftly fly.

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Date: 2/18/2016 11:50:00 AM
Green, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/5/2015 10:07:00 PM
Green, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/25/2011 12:06:00 PM
Very well written. I wonder why it didn't get that much views. i'm glad I was one of the views. This poem is creatively written. i love the concept of old lady that still waiting for love, though it won't seem to come..
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Date: 11/2/2010 4:59:00 AM
Enjoyable villaNELLE WITH NICE RHYMING AND equally apt refrains, Green
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