Crazy Profound 3

(Dedication: For Tim Smith, my PoetrySoup buddy)


Sun steers shadow
Moon mimes mellow
Firm faith follows


Day dons deep daze
Hurl hollow haze
Mist meets mind maze


Describe dream dance
Passion's plush prance
Chasing charm's chance


Curves charm clear choice
Play plots prime poise
Next norm now noise


Time transits trip
Life loiters leap
Soon season sleeps


Make motives meet
Start story sweet
Touch tender treat


Be bold belief
Rest ripe relief
Glimpse gloomy grief


Pain paves pathway
Cheer calms cold clay
Deuce detains day


Death deals dire deed
Nurture notes need
Flesh finds fine feed


Leon Enriquez
20 Feb 2014
Singapore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/24/2015 12:45:00 AM
I love alliteration. Leon, tonight I will enjoy a few of your first poems. Hugs SKAT
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 5/27/2015 8:24:00 AM
Dear Skat: Yes, I hope you enjoyed your sojourn with these thoughts. Thank you. Leon
Date: 2/20/2014 3:56:00 PM
Leon, I like it, I like it. And thanks for liking mine Nola
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Date: 2/20/2014 6:04:00 PM
Dear Nola: Thanks. Leon
Date: 2/20/2014 10:20:00 AM
Thank you my friend Leon...I started new hours at work just got home and it is 10 am here...I am going to take a nice nap then write something..I have a few ideas but I am getting delusional being up for 28 hrs.
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 2/20/2014 10:34:00 AM
Dear Tim: Yup get a good rest. Thanks for your support. I hope you like this piece. Leon
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