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''Crazy Old Lady''

 
I wake early- even before the birds, my nightgown is thread-bare, all a tatter; when I try to talk, I just lose my words, my mirror reveals a frumpy oldster. Oh, that is not me- I am beautiful, just a silly optical illusion; this old mirror is quite unsuitable, a figment of my imagination. There is an old lady in front of me, she is ancient, white-haired and crumbling; wait, maybe that is me- wish I could see, oh, she is back that sweet girl summoning. Do come sweet girl- lets go for breakfast, now where is my lipstick and pearl necklace? _______________________ August 26, 2016 Poetry/Sonnet/"Crazy Old Lady Copyright Protected, ID 16-823-455-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Which Of The Four sponsor, Sara Kendrick Theme - old age Seventh Place
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Lamoureux Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Congrats Constance, I enjoyed this piece.
Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Creative way to go for the contest..I enjoyed reading your entry..A Pearl necklace will fix most anything..Thanks for participating in my contest..Congrats on your win..Sara
Arnone Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 7:46 PM
So important to get the right mirror to compliment your best reflection -- or, ban the cursed things from the house! Congrats! :-)
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 10:55 AM
Constance, wonderful write :) Oh, it is a time of age that I wish to push time back and see the beautiful smiling woman that showed her face in the mirror instead of the person that has stole my identity..... Hugs Eve
Turner Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 6:07 PM
Fun poem, Constance. Life is a masquerade is it not? I love the humor and laughing keeps one feeling young.
Smith Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 3:46 PM
Great poem Constance...we all believe we are young...and so be it we are...at heart and mind
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Think I'm going to smash all my mirrors after reading this Constance - great poem my friend - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
Parker Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 2:51 PM
To look in the mirror and wish for what was confronted by what is, a moment we all have found as we move through time..good luck in the contest
Babbit Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 2:14 PM
Your poem begs the question - how do we see ourselves? I think that's me in the rear view mirror. Enjoyed your write, good luck in the contest,
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