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Crazy Crazy Love

Inspired By Angel Marie and
Her Poem "Crazy Love"


She looked at me with tear filled eyes
And said that we were through
Then walked away, from my love
There, was nothing I could do

Now my fright, grows strong at night
I pray that she is near
To think she might, not return
Is now my greatest fear

I drive around, while on my cell
But she's nowhere in sight 
Worried sick to death
I hope that she's alright

Perhaps she's leaving on a jet
She may be going home
I fail to see what this has done
But leave us both alone

Copyright © Jerry T Curtis | Year Posted 2014

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Sharon Gulley Date: 10/3/2014 8:02:00 PM Oh and Congrats on Poem Of The Day. Login to Reply

Sharon Gulley Date: 10/3/2014 8:01:00 PM I thought it was an awesome attempt to answer her poem from the other side of it and I truly enjoyed your intent to in another way say you enjoyed hers. Great job and your welcome to spin off mine anytime. As always I love your work and thought pattern here....Sharon G. Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 10/3/2014 7:49:00 PM Great poem Jerry, sorry I'm late. Congratulations on poem of the day. Login to Reply

Dave Timperley Date: 10/3/2014 1:45:00 PM Never had a lost love Jerry, still got The First Lady. Loved your write though, congrats on poem of the day. God Bless. D. Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/2/2014 2:46:00 PM excellent piece of writing jerry Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/1/2014 8:55:00 PM Yeah Jerry! A sad one that brings to mind the song "Leaving on a Jet Plane" congratulations my friend. Login to Reply

Ashley Wakefield Date: 10/1/2014 8:07:00 PM Congratulations on making poem of the day! Your poem was very touching and well written. It made me feel something and connect those feelings to past experiences of mine. Thank you for a wonderful post, twas an honor to read ^-^ Peace, love and light <3 Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 10/1/2014 8:02:00 PM Congrats Jerry on this great honor....cheers Tim Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/1/2014 2:44:00 AM - Terry, a unique and very well written poem - Congratulations on your poem of the day !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/1/2014 2:24:00 AM Congratulations on your poem of the day it is wonderful that another poet was your muse for this wonderful write. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/1/2014 1:43:00 AM fabulous write Jerry I love it when we are inspired by the words of others and a new poem is born as a result - great to see this as poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/30/2014 12:15:00 PM such a poetic delight, jerry... a really sweet-crazy kind of love.. huggs Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 9/30/2014 10:51:00 AM I enjoyed this write, Jerry. Often people will get inspired by others and write a poem in a similar vein. It's called an echo poem. This is lovely. Nice that you pointed people back to the source of your inspiration. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 10/1/2014 1:42:00 AM I love it when i inspire or am inspired by others to write - I always refer to their poem or ask permission before posting it:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/30/2014 10:20:00 AM Nice write on feeling lonely for the lost love, Jerry Login to Reply

Angel Marie Date: 9/29/2014 7:48:00 PM Thank you very much for your review on my poem "Crazy Love". I'm glad it inspired you to write too, however, your "Crazy Crazy Love" is still kind of my poem though..? I appreciate that you mentioned my name on top, that's good! I would really love to read your own creation, you know? :) ~~ I'm sorry please don't take this comment the wrong way, I am very protective of my poems (I've had 4 of my poems plagiarized). PS. This is a nice version of mine, I like it. :) Login to Reply Jerry T Curtis Date: 9/30/2014 6:57:00 AM Sorry Angel if I have given you cause for grief, that was not my intention, I fully understand your point and concern. I will remove this version this evening, No hard feelings, ok