Crazy

CRAZY ~~~~~~~~~ Lazy, crazy, hazy, Mazy, next day, me so lazy, crazy night, sadly a tad ha/zy, Mazy White

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2018 7:48:00 PM

I really like it but aren't the two words supposed to be together at the ends of the last two lines? I will have to study it out. Maybe I got it wrong. Anyway, I think you came up with a clever poem!

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/22/2018 3:31:00 AM

Opps another oversight, then your not quite right either, in the middle, just a tad off center, but I thank you for the heads up. I have amended it going by the P.S. example. Thanks Andrea... Mick

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/20/2018 12:51:00 PM

:))) ... funny one, Mick - // Anne-Lise :)

Mick Talbot
Date: 1/20/2018 3:57:00 PM

Hehe, she'll probably me give a slap for spelling her name wrong, (if it was true). Pleased it made you laugh, thanks, Anne-Lise, appreciated!