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Craziness

Diarrhea---dying, rear

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2010 12:33:00 PM

I got about 99% go ahead about Crystallized.. the meter is a ten count line for each line starting with weak/strong/weak/strong and so on... if u read the first verse of my poem again u can count the words on your fingers to get the tempo of the meter... NO I don't get it either but I wanted to try anyway.. hope this helps out Doris.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2010 12:11:00 PM

HA HA HA HA HA .. am seeing the Pepto Bismol bottle in your verse ... EXCELLENT!! thankxxx for a good Valentine Day laugh.. HVD to u and yours.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/13/2010 5:02:00 PM

Oh! Do you need the Pepto? Mom

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/13/2010 4:56:00 PM

Ooh, No!! You are a riot! Doris. I'm almost fell off the chair! Thanks for the laughter! Peace, love, Audrey