crayola hiku

blue skies and seas
yellow sun, green grass and trees
crayon-colored dreams
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George Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 10:26 PM
Your haiku is like crayons in the hands of a child. Beautiful, Andrea.
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 10:58 AM
charming ~
Hind Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 9:59 PM
Pretty dreams!! :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 2:23 PM
Creative winning work for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this winner with us. Congrats..Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 6:43 AM
I like the simplicity of this write, as if I am seeing crayons in a child’s hands, first coloring a page. They don’t need imagination, yet, but to catch the world that they see!
Kerr Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 12:54 AM
Congratulations to you Andrea on your win with this hue imbued entry. It immediately attracts and sustains the attention of the reader with its colour scheme and lyrical vision Howard
Poet Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 12:32 AM
Such fantastic layers of colors and deep metaphors, Andrea. Congratulations on your win.
Legros Kelley Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 4:38 PM
Very sweet little haiku Andrea, I love this little gem! <3
Horne Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 5:39 AM
clever write here, my friend
Baker Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 6:53 PM
Nice colorful Haiku, my friend. Bill
Mac Donald Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 11:37 AM
A beautiful write! I can imagine those bright colours. Thanks for sharing!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 10:43 AM
You write such wonderful haikus. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 9:09 AM
What a fun/colorful Haiku write. Have a fun day writing away...............
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