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Craving Rimas Dissolutas

Strum on my wrecked nerves 'til I faint cuffed and connected to your pick; I'll be the oil on your guitar hitting your pulse points with my gasp; Left with need I'll have no complaint except when the encore's a trick; That just takes it a step too far. like your hand on a broken clasp; Turning you on with my desire, becoming the craving you rasp.

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Date: 5/21/2023 9:35:00 AM
- I love the intimacy and sensuality of your poem - by the title, you add a sense of liberation to it, both the poem in its structure and in conveying how love should make you feel - thank you for this
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 5/21/2023 9:36:00 AM
Wow. Thank you so much. There is a lot of me in this piece. Blessings.

Book: Shattered Sighs