Craving For a Bouquet

Her bouquet a dewed vessel
Flaming my love’s intense desire ;
I wait till rosette hips
Succumb to grinds of ecstasy.



Leon Datu, jul14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 6:48 PM
Sizzling! what a hot winner!
Lindley Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 8:46 PM
Hot, sexy and passionate .. Congrats on your win!!!
Lawless Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 6:43 PM
HOT! HOT! HOT! This whole winners list should be preceded with a post shower warning. Great response to the theme Leon.
Richards Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 5:45 PM
Wow........now this is passionate, heated with excitement....whew...!! A great win!
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 4:29 PM
Sultry. YES!!! Big congrats for a fine win.
Callus Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Another poem that flows passionately and sensually! Congrats on your merited win. // paul
Mehta Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 7:42 AM
Passionate write and a nice approach the visual, Leon
A. Sharma Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 7:09 AM
Great passionate one Leon , congrats on huge win!
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 4:45 AM
Passionate winning Jeu Ju ..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 12:26 PM
wonderful sensual write congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Paras Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 6:27 PM
OH man, this fires away. Great descriptive write, such passionate appeal here, Leon!
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