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Craving

Let me soak in the bliss filled beauty, Before I can release my passion, Stroking moments in sensuality; Entwined to a lovable flagrant dream? Yours is the dark world of arrogance, Black soft braids play within your shadows, Consumed you ignite others on fire, Vibrant luscious lips in fatalism; Ceded, the tattoo on your back moves Under the skin to my desired whim, And I caress thy being from afar, Untouched you yield to yearn with pleasure. Here I burn in pure fascination; While you coolly seduce temptation;

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/31/2010 2:52:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with two poems. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 5/12/2010 2:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured write this week Jai. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2010 10:31:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/9/2010 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured on the Soups Homepage >> James
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Date: 12/11/2009 8:16:00 AM
Awesome write, Jai! Filled with great imagery, passion! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/11/2009 4:16:00 AM
Very interesting poetry you have posted today Jai. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/10/2009 2:04:00 AM
Great poem, enjoyed by Simone
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