Crave

Oh what a sight 
it has been to many days and nights 
what a pleasure 
what a thrill
i want it now 
my hand is trembling i lick my lips 
so uncertain but i want it so much
closer......closer and closer still
gonna do it till nothing is left
oh its there i take a deep breath
the end all a fire  
wonderful pleasure i want more 
i tried to stop 
honest i did 
all i wanted was a CIG
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Mir Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 6:33 PM
great pace to it, nice poem
Beesley Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 6:34 AM
good work and as napoleon once said, "men are controlled by their vices and not their virtues" o how terrible and true
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 2:45 PM
I missed this one. Mmmmmmmm saucy girl friend. I normally have half a cig and the fires burning again. Oops too much info
Brown Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 6:07 AM
What a great array of poetry we have been presented to read today. I am happy yours is one of those poems I have read today. I hope your day brings you much inspiration so you may continue presenting your poetry to us to read Pamela. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 6:16 AM
maybe you can overcome...food is my vice!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace