Crave

Oh what a sight it has been to many days and nights what a pleasure what a thrill i want it now my hand is trembling i lick my lips so uncertain but i want it so much closer......closer and closer still gonna do it till nothing is left oh its there i take a deep breath the end all a fire wonderful pleasure i want more i tried to stop honest i did all i wanted was a CIG

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U.A. Mir

Date: 8/5/2010 6:33:00 PM

great pace to it, nice poem

Anthony Beesley

Date: 7/30/2010 6:34:00 AM

good work and as napoleon once said, "men are controlled by their vices and not their virtues" o how terrible and true

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 7/28/2010 2:45:00 PM

I missed this one. Mmmmmmmm saucy girl friend. I normally have half a cig and the fires burning again. Oops too much info

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/28/2010 6:07:00 AM

What a great array of poetry we have been presented to read today. I am happy yours is one of those poems I have read today. I hope your day brings you much inspiration so you may continue presenting your poetry to us to read Pamela. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/27/2010 6:16:00 AM

maybe you can overcome...food is my vice!