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Crashing Waves

As the storm rolls in, the thick dark 
clouds build up in the sky.
 
The extravagant pink, orange and yellow 
colors appear over the water as the sunsets 
across the ocean.

The flashing of lights coming from the 
storm clouds light her dimly lit face.

Feelings of freedom and happiness over 
whelms me as I lay next to her.

The feeling numbs my body from head to toe.

As we lay on the car hood and talk, her 
voice carries me above the clouds.

The wind picks up, and with it carries the 
scent of crashing waves.

Our conversation grows quit.

I lay next to her lessoning to her soft 
steady breathing, the silence becomes 
uncomfortable.

As I began to speak she reaches over and 
puts her soft fingers against my trembling 
lips.


She sits up and leans towards me, my heart 
rate begins to race.


The wind blows her smooth, delicate hair 
graciously against my face.


Rain drops cautiously begin to fall, she 
moves ever so closer, with every move my 
heart pounds harder and my eyes grow weary.


Then it happens, everything around me 
stops; the thunder, the lighting, and the 
rain, all stop as if frozen in time.


Its lasts only a few seconds, for we had 
come back to reality, and with it came the 
scent of crashing waves.

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Date: 10/2/2011 7:57:00 PM
Great story. Nice blend of love and nature.
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