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Crappier Haiku

"crappier haiku" contemplating bird nest soup tastes like spit

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/19/2023 7:28:00 PM

Isn’t that made from swallows or swifts? I remember reading about it ages ago. Gawd I love those birds. xomo

Jeff Connelly
Date: 8/20/2023 6:20:00 AM

I have a great love of those birds as well; and yes, the secret savoury flavor is from their saliva...

Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2023 8:42:00 AM

omg lol:-) that is SO SO SO clever lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jeff Connelly
Date: 8/19/2023 8:57:00 AM

Thank Maureen McGreavy; she's always been an inspiration. But thank you Jan for commenting

Lin Lane

Date: 8/19/2023 8:34:00 AM

That'd give cause for contemplation as to why anyone would want to taste bird nest soup. All I'd think about are the poops that were taken in the nest before it was put in the soup pot. Ok, now you and Mo are making me have to write 'crappiet haiku.'

Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2023 8:41:00 AM

It's posted

Jeff Connelly
Date: 8/19/2023 8:38:00 AM

I look forward to reading it Lin