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Long wanders across hills Expiring - Three of my steps were one of my Dad's Halting will Refuelling near Banks brandished fennell freely had Revered Herb young Stung by green glad Tongue Washed down with water swills Sweaty bunch became invalid Flung 29th July 2020 Minichu an Innocent Childhood Memory Mohan Chutani

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Mohan Chutani

Date: 8/31/2020 9:50:00 AM

Sigrid, thanx for participating in my contest though you may have thought it to be a torture as commented by you below. But you will agree, we got so many lovely entries. Technically, you got it fine. Wishing you best and congrats for your placement. Mohan

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/31/2020 2:10:00 PM

... Just realised that my lines are each different, which doesn't seem to be the format practiced.

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/31/2020 1:55:00 PM

!! Thanks so much, Mohan!! I respect your form, and comments are transparent, I know. Also commented that Ghazal is not for me, too repetitive. Thank you for hosting it, because all practice helps me learn.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/16/2020 7:59:00 AM

Beautiful ...

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/2/2020 8:05:00 PM

This is incredibly interesting. I am perplexed by one part of it because I think I know, but maybe I do not know. "three of my steps were one of my dad's". This is intriguing!

Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/2/2020 11:03:00 PM

Nothing mysterious, I'm afraid. Just I was a little 'un. This minichu form was torture! Tight syllables and rhyme. Who thinks this form is fun!!??