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Crafty Cow

She stands there waiting Chewing the cud and watching for the dark rain clouds Maybe I should lie down and confuse the weather watchers

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2012 10:05:00 PM

there is a soupmail for you and I'm waiting for your reply. Will come back in the morning. Luv, Andrea

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/21/2012 12:13:00 PM

all sorted, I did a slimming club one afterwards lol Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2012 4:46:00 PM

hahaha, at first I thought you had written weight watchers and I got a real kick out of that line I imagined as well!! soupmail.

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/20/2012 11:25:00 PM

Lol will have to think f a wright watchers one...Seren.

Rollo West

Date: 12/20/2012 11:08:00 AM

Hi Seren, what a great Tanka, and personal to me as my mother taught me the meaning of the cows laying or standing. Rollo

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/20/2012 2:52:00 PM

lol Rollo, see the world over we all have the same thoughts, cows lying down its going to rain Merry Christmas Rollo ... Seren

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/20/2012 7:08:00 AM

Those crows are so intelligent..Great work describing them..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Sara

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/20/2012 7:58:00 AM

Nice to see you here Sara.....Seren

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/20/2012 6:53:00 AM

What a clever witty poem. You just brightened up my day.

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/20/2012 7:56:00 AM

aww I am so glad... Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/20/2012 6:21:00 AM

who's a clever girl then , nice one Sass xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/20/2012 7:59:00 AM

Thanks Mandy, how'd the boy?...Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/20/2012 7:59:00 AM

oops typo How's*

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/20/2012 3:37:00 AM

Oh you take me back Seren, the farmers up the dale, alway reliant on their beast(Cows) to tell them about the weather.. this is a very clever poem, and Tanka form too, even better...

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/20/2012 4:28:00 AM

wow weeee Harry,I must have had a brain surge ....Seren

David Williams

Date: 12/20/2012 2:53:00 AM

ha ha, Seren this is just brilliant, great metaphor, I love it...David