Cradle

Come
Cradle
In my arms
By the fireplace
Lay your head on my chest and rock to sleep

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Andrea Dietrich

April 14, 2014 at 3:49 PM

Tim, what you said about that contest my little rhyme poem is entered in. I just came way back here to let you know. that judge does not like me. She never lets me win. I would be absolutely floored if she put me on the ten winners list. Absolutely floored!!

February 7, 2010 at 12:48 PM

You have me smiling with this comforting scene. Sounds like love to me. Thank you for sharing your Tetractys with us and for your kind words on mine. Keep on writing!!! Karen

Elaine George

December 3, 2009 at 12:28 AM

BEAUTIFUL! Lainie

Debbie Guzzi

November 29, 2009 at 5:00 PM

so romantic!!!ohhhhh Light & Love

Carrie Richards

November 28, 2009 at 5:03 PM

MMMmmm this one is romantic, sweet and lovely! Nicely done, Tim! ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 28, 2009 at 3:00 PM

Fireplaces are so lovely and warm.. like your sweet poetry ... sounds invitingly sweet ... enjoyed... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetie" Soup Mail shortly ...