Cradle

Come Cradle In my arms By the fireplace Lay your head on my chest and rock to sleep

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2014 3:49:00 PM

Tim, what you said about that contest my little rhyme poem is entered in. I just came way back here to let you know. that judge does not like me. She never lets me win. I would be absolutely floored if she put me on the ten winners list. Absolutely floored!!

Date: 2/7/2010 12:48:00 PM

You have me smiling with this comforting scene. Sounds like love to me. Thank you for sharing your Tetractys with us and for your kind words on mine. Keep on writing!!! Karen

Elaine George

Date: 12/3/2009 12:28:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL! Lainie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/29/2009 5:00:00 PM

so romantic!!!ohhhhh Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/28/2009 5:03:00 PM

MMMmmm this one is romantic, sweet and lovely! Nicely done, Tim! ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/28/2009 3:00:00 PM

Fireplaces are so lovely and warm.. like your sweet poetry ... sounds invitingly sweet ... enjoyed... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetie" Soup Mail shortly ...

John Freeman

Date: 11/28/2009 2:30:00 PM

So Romantic Tim. Sincerely, Moses

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/28/2009 10:44:00 AM

So very romantic indeed..Charma