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Cracks In the Facade

In hardened bricks, their wall of denial, lie the cracks in the façade The water of truth drips Leaking slowly for everyone to see, Initiating anger Thunderous clouds, with booms Then from the black sky, falls the cleansing rain Rivers of tears in valleys Rainbows of forgiveness Heidi Sands 11/23/19 Placed 1st in the Pick a Title Vol. 11, Kimo Poetry Contest. Title picked: Cracks in the facade

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Chris Green

Date: 12/9/2019 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations Heidi. I was thrilled when I saw this one in the top spot.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/9/2019 9:58:00 AM

Thank you Chris. I will always appreciate your support. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/9/2019 6:56:00 AM

Back with congrats on your FIRST PLACE win, Heidi. Superb!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/9/2019 9:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay. I always appreciate all your support! Have a great day :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/8/2019 8:54:00 PM

Enjoyed! Congratulations, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/9/2019 6:41:00 AM

Thank you Kim :)

Na Na

Date: 12/8/2019 7:31:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/8/2019 7:55:00 PM

Thank you Gregory! Btw. I see your contest completed for judging, but no winner list showing? I will check back tomorrow :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/8/2019 6:40:00 PM

Congratulations Heidi on your first place win :) hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/8/2019 6:54:00 PM

Thank you very much Sandra :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/25/2019 4:54:00 PM

Wow! Such stunning imagery, my friend. And such a lovely transformation to conclude. Best of luck in the contest. Cheers, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 5:16:00 PM

Thank you Gershon! Cheers :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/25/2019 1:15:00 PM

Beautiful words, w/an even more beautiful message within them, Heidi. Love the last stanza! Golden truth inked w/silver passion strokes. Love and best wishes for the holiday.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/25/2019 1:50:00 PM

Thank you for your visit and great comment Freddie. I appreciate all your support. I hope that you have a nice holiday. Take care :)