cracks

cracks heard through ceiling suspense for squirrels awaiting fall of acorns and so much rain that they’ll float sans news they’ll only gather

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Paige Hind

Date: 9/27/2024 3:28:00 PM

Hey, this is an unique take on it. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/27/2024 1:40:00 AM

No squirrels here in Malta, Kim, but your poem fills the void as I get a full picture of expectancy. ~ Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2024 5:18:00 AM

Lots here! LOL! Thanks, Paul! Good to hear from you!

Maria Williams

Date: 9/26/2024 3:11:00 AM

Cute write Kim, in Australia - Sydney that is we don't have squirrels, but the possums keep running up and down the roof and jump on the trees. We loved the squirrels in London and in the US. Hugs Maria

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2024 5:19:00 AM

So interesting!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/25/2024 10:38:00 PM

Nice tanka, Kim. Ignorance is bliss, they say.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/27/2024 5:20:00 AM

True! Thank you, Subimal!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/25/2024 12:54:00 PM

Yes, from what they are saying it could be those acorns will float away in the storm. I hope you are prepared. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2024 12:57:00 PM

I hope so too! There is only two of us. Should be ok. Be safe, sweet Sara!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2024 12:53:00 PM

so cute, Kim. Write on!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2024 12:55:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! Hugs :)

Peonieslore xo

Date: 9/25/2024 12:47:00 PM

Lovely tanka.. i was thinking of making one of these just the other day. pleasure reading Dearest Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2024 12:53:00 PM

Hope to read one from you, Peonieslore! Thank You!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/25/2024 12:19:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your fun "cracks" write. Squirrels are sure busy this time of the year. I love to watch them work... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2024 12:54:00 PM

The sky cracks..expecting a great storm and they are oblivious :) Thank you, Paula!