cracks

cracks heard through ceiling suspense for squirrels awaiting fall of acorns and so much rain that they’ll float sans news they’ll only gather
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Hind Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 3:28 PM
Hey, this is an unique take on it. :)
Callus Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 1:40 AM
No squirrels here in Malta, Kim, but your poem fills the void as I get a full picture of expectancy. ~ Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 5:18 AM
Lots here! LOL! Thanks, Paul! Good to hear from you!
Williams Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 3:11 AM
Cute write Kim, in Australia - Sydney that is we don't have squirrels, but the possums keep running up and down the roof and jump on the trees. We loved the squirrels in London and in the US. Hugs Maria
Rodrigues Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 5:19 AM
So interesting!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 10:38 PM
Nice tanka, Kim. Ignorance is bliss, they say.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 5:20 AM
True! Thank you, Subimal!
Kendrick Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:54 PM
Yes, from what they are saying it could be those acorns will float away in the storm. I hope you are prepared. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:57 PM
I hope so too! There is only two of us. Should be ok. Be safe, sweet Sara!
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:53 PM
so cute, Kim. Write on!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:55 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Hugs :)
blegh Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:47 PM
Lovely tanka.. i was thinking of making one of these just the other day. pleasure reading Dearest Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:53 PM
Hope to read one from you, Peonieslore! Thank You!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:19 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun "cracks" write. Squirrels are sure busy this time of the year. I love to watch them work...  Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
Rodrigues Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:54 PM
The sky cracks..expecting a great storm and they are oblivious :) Thank you, Paula!
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