Cracking the Mirror Each Time

keeps butting her head against the same mirror
it cracks and breaks finally
so she finds another one as close to it as possible

Same scenario, 
Same scripts
Same arguments.

This mirror leaves too
Why do all the mirrors leave me? She asks.
The cat has no answers. Just glad to get all the attention now.

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Date: 5/14/2020 1:50:00 PM
Hello Caren Krutsinger, It could be that she does not like what she sees in the mirror. So she cracks it. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/15/2020 5:42:00 AM
It truly might be. I believe you are right.
Date: 5/11/2020 10:56:00 AM
Good one. It reminds me of doing the same things over and over with no better results is insanity. I have to change my way of thinking. I hope all is well with you and yours.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/12/2020 4:46:00 PM
Thank you Bette
Date: 5/3/2020 12:04:00 PM
Gershon, I hope the broom will be okay too!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/12/2020 4:46:00 PM
I am sure it would be.
Date: 5/3/2020 12:02:00 PM
"glad to get all the attention now," is a lovely twist & surprise. I adore that it may be read at so many levels/lives! shalom
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/4/2020 6:09:00 AM
I have to admit I come closer to a cat and dog's perspective sometimes than I do my own perspective. *whee*
Date: 5/2/2020 11:10:00 PM
Mirrors gonna be ok?! lol. Smiles, Felix
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/4/2020 6:09:00 AM
Who knows? And who cares? Smirk. Smirk.
Date: 5/2/2020 11:17:00 AM
So incredibly relatable!! What a wonderful read. This is going into my faves :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/4/2020 6:08:00 AM
Thank you Heather.
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