Cracked

Existence cracked,
my life hacked.

Rest is all I seek,
damned for being meek.

Tears of an expression unknown,
confusion down to the bone.

Rage cannot be contained,
must break free of the chains.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fraser Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 7:07 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
Jordan Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 8:36 PM
Jon - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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September 15, 2009 at 1:39 AM
Jon, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
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September 14, 2009 at 3:46 PM
congrats on being a featured poet, deeply moving poem!!
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September 14, 2009 at 4:01 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jon. Love, Carol
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July 19, 2009 at 2:43 PM
Jon, I read your blog, I have written about my divorce, if time, see my poem.."the axe" great write! jim
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May 3, 2009 at 9:34 PM
Jon, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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April 28, 2009 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Jon. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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February 1, 2009 at 10:52 PM
Hope all is well, nice work...Raul
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December 1, 2008 at 5:15 PM
SWEET Poem!!! Keep writing Awesome poems like this one. . . Love Alexz ^.^
Jordan Avatar
September 20, 2008 at 9:02 AM
Jon a very deep and introspective poem - Keep the faith and seek the answers bro - God Bless
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