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Crack of Thunder Beach

crack of thunder beach
clashing of hot and cold fronts
clapping erasers
splashing of dust molecules
summer school is in session

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Sara Kendrick

June 16, 2023 at 11:40 AM

Those poor students who have to go to summer school. Yet they still have a lot of summer fun. My daughters went to summer school every year to get a subject out of the way so they could graduate early. Very creative one you have shared with us today and your visits to my page are so special. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

June 16, 2023 at 1:24 PM

Happy Friday, Sara! Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar

June 15, 2023 at 2:49 AM

Summer thunder can be dangerous. Back to school - ugh :) Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues

June 15, 2023 at 8:16 AM

LOL! The days of school and thunder… Hugs ~ Kim

Gershon Wolf

June 14, 2023 at 7:57 PM

You have blended two diametrically opposed scenes nicely, Kim... Also toyed with my emotions: Blasted summer school!! aka How to ruin a perfectly fine summer day!! Only had to go to summer school once, and that wasn't really summer school, b/c it was already college. THANK GOD! (And to think, I was a teacher for 30 years. Students sure had it good with me, eh?!)

Kim Rodrigues

June 15, 2023 at 8:17 AM

I bet you were a great teacher! I appreciate you so!!