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Crack of Thunder Beach

crack of thunder beach clashing of hot and cold fronts clapping erasers splashing of dust molecules summer school is in session

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/16/2023 11:40:00 AM

Those poor students who have to go to summer school. Yet they still have a lot of summer fun. My daughters went to summer school every year to get a subject out of the way so they could graduate early. Very creative one you have shared with us today and your visits to my page are so special. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/16/2023 1:24:00 PM

Happy Friday, Sara! Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/15/2023 2:49:00 AM

Summer thunder can be dangerous. Back to school - ugh :) Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2023 8:16:00 AM

LOL! The days of school and thunder… Hugs ~ Kim

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2023 7:57:00 PM

You have blended two diametrically opposed scenes nicely, Kim... Also toyed with my emotions: Blasted summer school!! aka How to ruin a perfectly fine summer day!! Only had to go to summer school once, and that wasn't really summer school, b/c it was already college. THANK GOD! (And to think, I was a teacher for 30 years. Students sure had it good with me, eh?!)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2023 8:17:00 AM

I bet you were a great teacher! I appreciate you so!!