Crack of Shine

The sky was dark and dreary
as I trudged along the path,
with vision dim and bleary,
under thunderclouds of wrath,

one foot before another,
plodding onward through despair,
yet knowing of no other
road to lead me anywhere.

With blackness fast descending,
though my journey incomplete,
the trail became unending,
and I gave up in defeat.

Surrendering my proneness
to stouthearted courage prove,
I foundered in aloneness,
too dispirited to move.

Every hope and dream was gone
as I lay me down supine,
having no will to go on…
Then I spied a crack of shine.

Light was streaming through the cleft
in a sort of golden haze.
The impression that it left
was of some illumined blaze

which had kept aflame within
midst my melancholy mood
and a mindless inner din
that begot disquietude.

The fissure in the shadow
letting in the rays of light
summoned forth an inner glow
which was hidden from my sight.

I stayed there lying prostrate
for what seemed eternity,
speculating on my fate
as to be or not to be.

At length I managed to rise,
unsteady but striving still.
For life goes on– great nature’s wise–
it can, it must, and it will.

Yes life goes on– the truth there lies– 
it can, it must, and it will.

The vision that was present
has never lost its power.
What I saw plus what it meant
comes back in my darkest hour.

It reappears through thick and thin–
that crack of shine that dwells within…

It’s always there through thick and thin–
that crack of shine that dwells within…


~ Harley White

< November 2016 >

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/2/2019 10:34:00 AM
I saw crack of shine when I was pretty old. Everyone sees that sooner or later)
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Date: 6/1/2019 8:08:00 AM
I think the dark and the shine don't differ in substance, falling into the category of optical effects. Metaphysical optical effects, in this case) Perfect path, Harley. The path on which there are no losses.
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Date: 6/2/2019 10:03:00 AM
I agree and thank you. When I was a child, I saw a sight like that in the sky, which I dubbed 'crack of shine'. This came back to me and inspired the poem.
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