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Crack In Reality

~~~ It may have been only an illusion, a delusion or dream; yet, in that vivid imagination I once possessed, the tiniest crack became an open floodgate ~ I couldn’t help myself from drowning in you. ~~~

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Date: 9/18/2019 5:05:00 PM
Loved how you crafted this, HT..dream or not you conveyed passion with an impact in the ending lines:I couldn’t help myself from drowning in you. A talented write.
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Date: 9/18/2019 9:56:00 PM
Thank you, dear Vijay ~
Date: 9/17/2019 7:14:00 AM
I loved this, the simplicity of the message but the emotional confession of the thoughts and feelings. I understand this feeling all too well and though for the most part it is wonderful, there are those moments that cause us to wonder why. Beautifully crafted my friend.
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Date: 9/17/2019 10:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Chris, for the compliment and sharing your understanding ~
Date: 9/16/2019 8:15:00 PM
sad that those feelings are so deep through an illusion or dream...one can feel the sense of longing...poignantly penned!
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Date: 9/16/2019 8:26:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra...
Date: 9/15/2019 8:45:00 AM
Bittersweet poem...
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Date: 9/15/2019 11:52:00 AM
Yes, it is. Thank you for stopping by, Silent One.
Date: 9/15/2019 5:57:00 AM
- Feelings come as they wish, a great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/15/2019 11:50:00 AM
Indeed they do ~ Thank you, Anne-Lise :)

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