Crack In Reality

~~~ It may have been only an illusion, a delusion or dream; yet, in that vivid imagination I once possessed, the tiniest crack became an open floodgate ~ I couldn’t help myself from drowning in you. ~~~
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Pandit Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 5:05 PM
Loved how you crafted this, HT..dream or not you conveyed passion with an impact in the ending lines:I couldn’t help myself from drowning in you. A talented write.
There Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 9:56 PM
Thank you, dear Vijay ~
Green Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 7:14 AM
I loved this, the simplicity of the message but the emotional confession of the thoughts and feelings. I understand this feeling all too well and though for the most part it is wonderful, there are those moments that cause us to wonder why. Beautifully crafted my friend.
There Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 10:30 AM
Thank you so much, Chris, for the compliment and sharing your understanding ~
Adams Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 8:15 PM
sad that those feelings are so deep through an illusion or dream...one can feel the sense of longing...poignantly penned!
There Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 8:26 PM
Thank you, Sandra...
One Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 8:45 AM
Bittersweet poem...
There Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 11:52 AM
Yes, it is. Thank you for stopping by, Silent One.
Andresen Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 5:57 AM
- Feelings come as they wish, a great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
There Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 11:50 AM
Indeed they do ~ Thank you, Anne-Lise :)
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