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Crack In Reality

 
~~~
It may have been only an illusion,
a delusion or dream;
yet, in that vivid imagination
I once possessed,
the tiniest crack became
an open floodgate ~
I couldn’t help myself
from drowning
in you.
~~~

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Vijay Pandit Date: 9/18/2019 5:05:00 PM Loved how you crafted this, HT..dream or not you conveyed passion with an impact in the ending lines:I couldn’t help myself from drowning in you. A talented write. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/18/2019 9:56:00 PM Thank you, dear Vijay ~

Chris Green Date: 9/17/2019 7:14:00 AM I loved this, the simplicity of the message but the emotional confession of the thoughts and feelings. I understand this feeling all too well and though for the most part it is wonderful, there are those moments that cause us to wonder why. Beautifully crafted my friend. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/17/2019 10:30:00 AM Thank you so much, Chris, for the compliment and sharing your understanding ~

Sandra Adams Date: 9/16/2019 8:15:00 PM sad that those feelings are so deep through an illusion or dream...one can feel the sense of longing...poignantly penned! Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/16/2019 8:26:00 PM Thank you, Sandra...

Silent One Date: 9/15/2019 8:45:00 AM Bittersweet poem... Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/15/2019 11:52:00 AM Yes, it is. Thank you for stopping by, Silent One.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/15/2019 5:57:00 AM - Feelings come as they wish, a great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Hello There Date: 9/15/2019 11:50:00 AM Indeed they do ~ Thank you, Anne-Lise :)