Cozy Kinship

People come to tell me your weaknesses
They come with a list of vices and faults
When they are done, I laughed out their meanness
But they make me love you more for your faults.
Our relationship assigned forever                             
The will stamped and signed, never to depart
We ought to love in fair or foul weather
We may retract the heart though cannot part.
Our love is priced more than the world can hold
A vast reservoir, the rivers can’t slake
We have built such secrecy quite controlled
Our manners will overcome if there’s slack.
   Let’s us be patient in love while we live
  When we’re no more, forever we may live. 

                         +++
September 2, 2014
Form: Sonnet (Pentameter Syllable count-140)
Sixth Place Win
Contest: Intimate Relationship by Regina

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/6/2014 7:47:00 AM
Dr. Ram What a romantically sweet write that proves love is forever and always even after we leave this earth. Thank you for the great comment on my My Nicknames poem.
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Date: 9/3/2014 8:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Excellent piece! Kika
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Date: 9/3/2014 11:44:00 AM
Lovely Dr ram, many congratulations xx
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Date: 9/3/2014 9:18:00 AM
Wow that's a great one Dr Ram! True love is immortal I agree, congrats on huge win!
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Date: 9/3/2014 7:15:00 AM
Dear Dr. Ram, A beautiful sonnet and I do believe what you say in your last line. True love is carried with us into eternal life. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/3/2014 1:24:00 AM
I like your devotion, dr. ram.. wonderful!.. rounds of applause to you!
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Date: 9/3/2014 12:35:00 AM
Congratulations, Dr. I am always delighted with your words. Thank you for entering my contest. God bless you and happy writing. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/2/2014 7:38:00 PM
It's good to see a true sonnet and not a wanna be sonnet. I like the message but think some of your end rhymes cold be better. Rhyming "faults and faults or "live in live is lazy poetry,at least to me.
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Date: 9/2/2014 7:04:00 AM
This piece is wonderful Dr Ram---Patient in Love to live---Patient in life to love---I think I can remember that. Best Wishes
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