Francine Roberts Poet Tail-rhyme

Cowboys and Aliens

*not for the contest

The movie was so exciting
cowboys and aliens fighting
the dog stole the show
some scenes were terribly fright'ning
with weapons that looked like lightning
and, again, I'd go




*just got home from the movie, trying out this
form

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Don Johnson August 8, 2011 at 1:34 AM think it might be coming, on the tv see it someone, but im stuck here down under, and me waterwings don't float... love it mama, love, Don

James Fraser August 2, 2011 at 5:05 PM You have tried it well Francine, and successfully. I shall have to look out for this movie :)

Black Eyed Susan August 2, 2011 at 12:19 PM I'd like to see this movie. your good review makes me want to go even more :)

Constance La France August 1, 2011 at 9:34 PM It is good to try out a form before your final entry for a contest, I do that sometimes also, and you got it so right for the contest, but I also enjoyed this one, but the other is breathtaking, sounds like the girls had a blast at the movies~~

John Loving Iii August 1, 2011 at 7:39 PM eehh, it was ok. john Francine Roberts August 1, 2011 at 7:46 PM you should have gone with us 5 ladies , you might have enjoyed it more John Loving Iii August 1, 2011 at 7:40 PM the movie.

Zzzzz Zzzzz August 1, 2011 at 11:00 AM An amusing and inventive write. They say never work with kids or animals (they usually steal the show!). Nicely done! xoxo Robert.