Cowboys

-LAST DAYS OF OLD BEN-


    “See that man up there on the mountain, son?”
“Yeah Pop, why’s he a’jes sittin there starin’ out at nuthin?"
 Well, son it ain’t nothin’ he’s seein’…Just nuthin we can’t see, know what I ‘m sayin’?” confused the boy just agreed.
 '"He’s a legend, that there Ol’ Ben. From times long past before e’en when I was borned,” Now he just sit’s on his old nag waitin’ for sumthin, just not sure, and can only guess what. They sez Ol’ Ben was a rascal way back when, boozing up moon shine, not carin’ a world fer nuthin’ or no one. Well, Old Ben got caught one day he did, they throwed his sloppy drunk hide in the tank fer a long time.' 

'Bet he didn’t care none, he din’ have nuthin to do.
As time went on, Ben got ought’n jail ‘n’ went right back to his thievin’ ways. As we all expected, the law was jus’ bout ready to throw him in the canner and toss the key down inta a well furev'r, when Ol’ Ben he saw something that took the fight right outn’ him ‘n’ made his chest swell.'
   'Comin’ round the Sheriff’s desk were the prettiest Southern Bell you ev’r did see, an’ Old Ben dropped his jaw- from that day on…. Ol’ Ben turnt into a man…. He fell in love with sweet Lindsay Lane, banker’s daughter- And they ran off to the range- and lived on what they can'. That little Southern Bell did’t care Ben was a wrangler, she loved him for’ver. But Oh her Daddy’ did care, he put up a fight’ ‘n’ gave reward money if’n someone’d kill Old Ben, you see, but Old Ben was too wiley. He knew… he always knew her Papa wuld git 'em somehow. That Pappy o’ her’s was a pain in the ass, and so they couldn’t never really get away. Rumors ran ‘round town lika a nuthin’, there was gonna be a showdown! Firse light 'n ba’ween Ben ‘n; her Daddy., Soon as that li’ Southern Bell heard, she begged her daddy to leave Ben alone, her daddy wasn’t havin’ it, and Ben knowed that’d be the only way they would be rid of her father.'
   'So The mor’n came of the quick draw- I ‘membe, it were  misty, foggy that day, culdn' see nuthin'. Both men drew guns walked 100 paces and shot! BAM! N dat was the day Old Ben really did change. Turned a rascal fount love inta a sad sad shell o’ a man..His Southern Bell tied him up in the night, so she would be the one to draw- hopin’ as soon as her daddy saw’ it were her, mebbe he’d let them go. But the anger and fog hid her daddy’s senses, he was a red burstin’, he took’n his pistol he shot. Shot her right in the head, blew the hat off (she wor’d Ben’s clothes) and there in all her glory- blond hair dusted with red.'"
  " Welp, her daddy done took his own life, but Ben, Old Ben and that old nag just stayed up in them hills forever- and to this day they visit the place his beloved lost her life.” 
Don’t know, can’t fathom eve’, a love that strong, one day you’ll look up there on that mountain and Old Ben will be gone.”

4/18/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/18/2014 12:34:00 PM
Wow Amy: such a twist ....and the dialect is so authentic. You weave a masterful story.
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Date: 5/3/2014 7:57:00 AM
This is the absolute best cowboy one I have read. Outstanding entry for the contest.
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Date: 5/2/2014 10:51:00 PM
You should take up scene writing , Absolutely brilliant .
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Date: 4/30/2014 11:44:00 AM
Dear Amy, Just love the cowboy lingo used throughout your poem. What a shame the Southern Belle choose to wear Old Ben's clothes. Too bad her father wasn't close enough to see his was shooting his daughter. Best wishes in the cowboy contest! Carolyn
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Date: 4/24/2014 10:18:00 PM
oh my gosh, so incredibly sad and so WELL written in the dialect of a cowboy!! I really enjoyed this, Amy. Gosh, if this if for that cowboy contest, it deserves FIRST place!!
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Date: 4/21/2014 12:01:00 PM
An echoing piece in my mind... Definitely a great cowboy piece.
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Date: 4/20/2014 10:56:00 AM
It reminds me of the days watching the old cowboy movies Sunday afternoons with my dad..Terrific story Amy...hugs Tim
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Date: 4/20/2014 9:24:00 AM
A classic Amy. Loved it.
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:31:00 AM
Very much impressed by the write on love to death, Amy
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