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Cowboy Hoedown

"Hey, lassie, How about going a-mooning? – We two I like full moon giving wrong ideas at the right times Feel salty air, sun kissed hair, in this endless summer". “Oh, just take me there, party at night, no sleeping The water flowing, hot guys there, butterflies here. My hips do the dips; my belly has turned to jelly.” “Hey lassie, try to dance with knees together Too bad if your knickers are leather Want to spin? Don’t even try Or everyone will shout “Oh my, Oh my” “ Oh, yea, My breasts is at its best, My back has gone all slack’ My sternum is all bunkum; My navel is all a-wobble Ice cream, Bike Rides, Late Night Bashes.” Surfing, swimming, hear waves crashing Shopping, driven round town, music loud, The top is down, days by the pool in the warm breeze. Later we might have a hoedown in the barn Let’s gather at the dust time Maybe some neighbors will play old time music We will sing and square dance.
+++ October 19, 2014 Form: Free Verse Third Place Win Contest: Hoe Down by Shadow Collaboration by Dr. Ram Mehta and Kanu Mehta. (Not on PS) Contest: Hoedown by Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 11/5/2014 7:31:00 PM
good write Ram and Kanu congrats on placing and ty for your support hugs
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Date: 11/5/2014 6:56:00 PM
Congratulations Dr. Mehta and Kanu on your win in the Cowboy Hoe Down Contest.
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Date: 11/5/2014 6:41:00 PM
great imagery Dr Mehta many congrats to you both:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/26/2014 3:52:00 PM
excellent piece of writing ram smiling beautifully penned dear friend
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Date: 10/19/2014 11:31:00 AM
Hello Dr. Ram, I think you might have a winner here in the contest. I wish you the best of luck. This write is a "7" from me Sir. The flow and the humor of the free verse narrative is quite excellent!! All the best to you!! Cheers, Gary
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