Cowboy Hoedown

The dancing pardners, dressed in dungarees,
With checkered shirts, and Stetsons, boots and spurs,
Are at a wedding. Joy the bride now asks
The band to play a tune that she prefers.

The fiddle music made 'em tap their toes,
But what she wants just brings the place to life.
The hoe down wedding is the place to be-
And Billy-Bob's so glad that Joy's his wife.

I shake my head and smile at what I see
and hear the whoops and cries as couples leap.
The fiddlers play so fast I can't resist,
But soon become a laughing, sweating heap.

I step upon my pardner's boot clad toes,
And pull her down when I fall to the floor.
I laugh so hard I cannot get my breath,
But she is angry, branding me a bore.

Some stop their dancing just to help me up
And wait there as I stumble to a chair.
The newlyweds,wrapped in each other's arms,
Dance on a though the rest of us aren't there.

This is their day, hope I haven't spoiled it
Even a little bit, that would be sad.
Most of the guests are crowding on dance floor,
But as for me, I'll rest here for a tad.

Before too long, I have to shout, "Yee-haa!"
I clasp my hands and then I stamp my feet.
The youngsters feign fatigue and clear the floor
And giggling, watch me leap up from my seat. 

October 10, 2014

Co Writer's:  Joyce Johnson
                   Jack Horne
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 10:14 AM
Many congratulations for a creative hoe down display...to both of you! Well done:) // paul
Hamilton Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 7:22 PM
love the humour in this Joyce super pen congrats in placing and for entering hugs
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 6:36 PM
dropping back with my congrats to you both:-) hugs jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 6:30 PM
Congratulations Joyce and Jack on your win in the Cowboy Hoe Down contest.
Mehta Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 12:03 PM
Awesome collaboration, good luck to both of you,
Bauer Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:57 PM
love it! you have both nailed this one and made me wish i were there for a do-si-do!
Yvonne Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:05 PM
What a wonderful colaboration by two great poets. I am sure you will do well in the contest.
Devonshire Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 5:53 PM
Dear Joyce and Jack, You did a splendid write for the Hoe Down contest. I love the foot-stamping, fiddling and dancing! That's what a hoe down is all about. Wishing you "Yee Haa" success in Shadow's contest! Love to both of you, Carolyn
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 3:15 PM
lovely write I enjoyed the collaboration - great job guys:-) good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx
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