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Cow From Tokyo:Heads

No cow,no milk
no milk now,
I will go,
my mom will go
to bring our cow
from Tokyo.

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/11/2012 12:49:00 AM

So nice to read your poetry-and a well deserved win,I must say-Charma

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/21/2012 6:44:00 PM

;) I think that would be a long voyage maybe the cows milk would curdle? Light & Love [from a friend of Da's]

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/9/2012 10:47:00 AM

like this, congrats on your winner in the contest. harry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/7/2012 1:20:00 AM

you are a winner in my heart, span!.. what;s next??.. love and huggs to you! :)

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/7/2012 1:40:00 AM

Thanks net for commenting again......

Jack Horne

Date: 2/2/2012 12:57:00 PM

LOL, good one! Many congrats on your wins : )

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/7/2012 1:39:00 AM

Thanks Jack very much........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2012 4:06:00 PM

I'm sorry if this one didn't win, Spandan. It was one of my favorites in the contest!

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/7/2012 1:38:00 AM

Thanks Andrea very much for commenting.....

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/7/2012 1:38:00 AM

Thanks Andrea very much for commenting.....

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/31/2012 5:09:00 AM

Waiting to see how your fare in this contest bc this is JUST GRAND! Your youth brings rays of new energy to the soup...Gwendolen

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/7/2012 1:36:00 AM

Thanks again Gwendolen for your kind comments......

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/30/2012 9:07:00 PM

oh gee, saondan... so cute and clever of you... you can make this into a children's book! .. enter this in the contest.. beat wishes!..:) huggs

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/7/2012 1:34:00 AM

Thanks Net for your kind comments.....

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/26/2012 9:51:00 PM

Spandan...This poetry is addictive..be sure to always do your homework first..then poetry..I have never met a rich poet..EVER! lol...Usually they make all their money when they are dead..Ok...now about this Cow from Tokyo...I am thrilled that u tackled this difficult contest..great answer for the challenge..You go, man. Gwendolen

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/7/2012 1:34:00 AM

Thanks Gwendolen and I will try to do the best in this matter...

M.I.A .

Date: 1/26/2012 7:30:00 PM

funny piece! have things i love, cows and tokyo!

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/7/2012 1:32:00 AM

Thanks mia I am glad that you luv my poem....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/26/2012 3:23:00 AM

:) :) :) SMILE !!! Good Spandan!oxox love Anne-Lise

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/7/2012 1:31:00 AM

Thanks Anne for commenting in my poem

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2012 7:45:00 PM

this is short but it is one of the cutest in the contest that I have seen!!!

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/7/2012 1:30:00 AM

Thanks Andrea for your comments

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2012 11:00:00 AM

I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing Spandan. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/7/2012 1:29:00 AM

Thanks Carol very much for commenting