Cow From Tokyo:Heads

No cow,no milk
no milk now,
I will go,
my mom will go
to bring our cow
from Tokyo.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Chircop Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 12:49 AM
So nice to read your poetry-and a well deserved win,I must say-Charma
Guzzi Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 6:44 PM
;) I think that would be a long voyage maybe the cows milk would curdle? Light & Love [from a friend of Da's]
Horsman Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 10:47 AM
like this, congrats on your winner in the contest. harry
Onclaud Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:20 AM
you are a winner in my heart, span!.. what;s next??.. love and huggs to you! :)
Karmakar Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:40 AM
Thanks net for commenting again......
Horne Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 12:57 PM
LOL, good one! Many congrats on your wins : )
Karmakar Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:39 AM
Thanks Jack very much........
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 4:06 PM
I'm sorry if this one didn't win, Spandan. It was one of my favorites in the contest!
Karmakar Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:38 AM
Thanks Andrea very much for commenting.....
Karmakar Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:38 AM
Thanks Andrea very much for commenting.....
Song Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 5:09 AM
Waiting to see how your fare in this contest bc this is JUST GRAND! Your youth brings rays of new energy to the soup...Gwendolen
Karmakar Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:36 AM
Thanks again Gwendolen for your kind comments......
Onclaud Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 9:07 PM
oh gee, saondan... so cute and clever of you... you can make this into a children's book! .. enter this in the contest.. beat wishes!..:) huggs
Karmakar Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:34 AM
Thanks Net for your kind comments.....
Song Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 9:51 PM
Spandan...This poetry is addictive..be sure to always do your homework first..then poetry..I have never met a rich poet..EVER! lol...Usually they make all their money when they are dead..Ok...now about this Cow from Tokyo...I am thrilled that u tackled this difficult contest..great answer for the challenge..You go, man. Gwendolen
Karmakar Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:34 AM
Thanks Gwendolen and I will try to do the best in this matter...
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January 26, 2012 at 7:30 PM
funny piece! have things i love, cows and tokyo!
Karmakar Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:32 AM
Thanks mia I am glad that you luv my poem....
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 3:23 AM
:) :) :) SMILE !!! Good Spandan!oxox love Anne-Lise
Karmakar Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:31 AM
Thanks Anne for commenting in my poem
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 7:45 PM
this is short but it is one of the cutest in the contest that I have seen!!!
Karmakar Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:30 AM
Thanks Andrea for your comments
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 11:00 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing Spandan. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Karmakar Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:29 AM
Thanks Carol very much for commenting
Syed Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 10:41 AM
Nice poem:) best wishes:)
Karmakar Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:27 AM
Thanks sadaf for you kind comments.....
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