Coverings

burlap coarse, cheap bagging, gardening, covering potatoes, cork boards / ballet shoes, pillows wedding, sleeping, dancing silky, colorful satin
Written March 12, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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March 25, 2018 at 9:10 PM
Being a novice, I wasn't familiar with this form of poetry, but I'm learning something new every day! It made me think of how burlap is currently popular in wedding décor, which I find strange, albeit harmless.
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March 26, 2018 at 5:47 AM
thanks, Amy, it is a form not used much, but I like it now and then too. Because it is inexpensive, burlap makes a good backdrop or even table covering. Appreciate your comment.
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March 20, 2018 at 7:24 AM
Subtle and kindly done.
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March 21, 2018 at 8:48 PM
thank you, Caren, appreciate your support today.
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March 13, 2018 at 6:09 AM
I like this!
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March 13, 2018 at 6:04 PM
thank you, Kim.
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March 12, 2018 at 2:58 PM
You did this form very well, good luck in the contest..
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March 12, 2018 at 7:44 PM
thanks, Silent, the diamante is not a very oft-used form and the description at PS doesn't mention but one kind of diamante, fortunately it is the antonym version.
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March 12, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Clever depiction from burlap to satin..I see how the words changed... coarse to satin. Best for a win, RAP.
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March 12, 2018 at 7:45 PM
thank you, vijay. I appreciate your read and remarks.
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