Courageous Faith

in complete darkness
beyond the veiled horizon —
a perfect sunrise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Schiavina Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 12:56 PM
Brilliant poem on Jesus's light, the uncreated Sun that doesn't set.
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 11:51 AM
I really like this. My comment on the poem above this one simply won't post. That's so annoying but it was a sweet senryu
Gifford Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 10:08 AM
Hello P.M, this is a beautiful scene you have captured. Nicely done. Have a great day, my friend.
Fowler Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 4:59 PM
Love this and also your Wholehearted (to which I was unable to post a comment). :)
Marc Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 10:50 AM
Thanks Linda! I appreciate all of your comments.
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 2:53 PM
this is so beautiful. How did I not see it or comment before?
Marc Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 10:05 AM
Thank you Andrea! You are too kind.
Baker Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 7:38 AM
Hope is on the horizon! Powerful image in your Senryu, P.M. I enjoyed the message. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Marc Avatar
August 10, 2022 at 3:54 PM
A lovely saying. Thanks Bill :)
Seeker Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 10:25 PM
~ drifting into our view. Beautiful write of unwavering faith of a resolute heart!
Marc Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 10:59 PM
Thank you my friend :)
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 1:25 PM
That is faith and also in knowing that we can trust that it will be there. I enjoyed reading your faith-based winner. Congratulations on this winner. Sara
Marc Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 10:56 PM
Agreed. Thanks Sara!!!
Ashley Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 6:03 PM
Dear P.M., I adore the pure spirit of this poem. Every day is perfect and innocent at birth, unblemished and beautiful before the hardships of the day takes its toll. My thoughts after reading your inspiring senryu. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Marc Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 10:01 PM
Thanks Susan ~ your comments are always so beautiful :)
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