Courage?!

What about life (and VALEO) could be so wrong Should I beat my fists - like King Kong? Sometimes God I'm not that strong!

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Abe Lopez

Date: 9/16/2009 7:39:00 PM

keep the faith, stand strong and conquer!

Date: 9/16/2009 5:08:00 PM

Keeping the faith, God gives us the strength that we don't have on our own. Fighting isn't always courage. Courage sometimes comes through adjusting and acceptance of what cannot be changed. As you can see, this sparked a few thoughts. Thank you for your kind comments. Keep on writing! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2009 4:25:00 PM

Many of us are not as strong as we would like to think we are, Joshua. Pounding our first on our chests like King Kong can expell some of the rage, but in the long run it doesn't change the problems life brings to our doors. Very nice rhyme, Joshua! Love, Carolyn