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Storm rages brimestones from ages to ages. The earth quakes from its foundation,flakes of hell erupts from the depths beneath. Seed of discord blossom In the very cord of the society as nightfalls in soweto forestalls the dawning of a new era. Blaming mankind's curiosity or nature's complexity. This is my first attempt on couplet,critics are welcome to air their minds.

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Date: 3/6/2016 2:15:00 PM
Ifeanyi,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/29/2014 4:50:00 PM
Nice... A couplet have two lines like... Format.. Storm rages brimestones from ages to ages. The earth quakes from itsfoundation,flakes of hell erupts from the depths beneath. Seed of discord blossom In the very cord of the society as nightfalls in soweto forestalls the dawning of a new era. Blaming mankind's curiosity or nature's complexity. Get it.... Enjoyed this poem immensely... Verlena
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Date: 1/23/2014 9:29:00 AM
Nice one dear
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