Talena Alienmermaid Poet Free verse

Couplet

Don't hold it against me
                         
              that
                              I 
                               want
                                        to 
                                            be
                                               held
                                                     by
                                                        you.

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Poet Destroyer A March 10, 2016 at 1:39 PM nice to see this one again, Talena. linda

Harry Horsman March 31, 2012 at 4:29 AM Wonderful winner here, Talena, i'm a bit late, but reading this i'm glad i dropped by. harry

Poet Destroyer A March 29, 2012 at 9:00 AM congrats on your placement

Carol Sunshine Brown March 28, 2012 at 7:19 AM Congratulations on your win in David's "Chiasmus" contest Talena. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi March 27, 2012 at 6:03 PM Makes you think hmmmm. Congrad's Light & Love

Gwendolen Song March 27, 2012 at 5:19 PM Super duper awesome win. :) Gwendolen

Deborah Burch March 27, 2012 at 4:45 PM Congratulations on your win Talena!!! Well Done! big huggsss,love~deb

Joann Grisetti March 27, 2012 at 4:42 PM very well done play on words, and grat visual.

Carrie Richards March 27, 2012 at 4:09 PM Nicely done, not only the words, but such an intriguing format!! Well done~!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 27, 2012 at 3:44 PM way to go Talena on a wonderful frst place win for fantastic words luv..

Black Eyed Susan March 27, 2012 at 3:44 PM Congratulations on your win! I like how your words mimick the idea - like the first line is a barrier and the bottom half is like you reaching out to him. Great idea :)