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Couplet

Don't hold it against me that I want to be held by you.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2016 1:39:00 PM

nice to see this one again, Talena. linda

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/31/2012 4:29:00 AM

Wonderful winner here, Talena, i'm a bit late, but reading this i'm glad i dropped by. harry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2012 9:00:00 AM

congrats on your placement

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2012 7:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in David's "Chiasmus" contest Talena. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/27/2012 6:03:00 PM

Makes you think hmmmm. Congrad's Light & Love

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/27/2012 5:19:00 PM

Super duper awesome win. :) Gwendolen

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/27/2012 4:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Talena!!! Well Done! big huggsss,love~deb

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/27/2012 4:42:00 PM

very well done play on words, and grat visual.

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/27/2012 4:09:00 PM

Nicely done, not only the words, but such an intriguing format!! Well done~!!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/27/2012 3:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! I like how your words mimick the idea - like the first line is a barrier and the bottom half is like you reaching out to him. Great idea :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/27/2012 3:44:00 PM

way to go Talena on a wonderful frst place win for fantastic words luv..