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Premiere Contest WinnerCouple sous l’arbre ou Les amoureux, Lovers, 1887-1985, Marc Chagall

I ache for an esoteric escape ~
    to relearn the unwritten rhythm,
 lost in the gravity
              of your gossamer gaze,
where the sun
                   no longer dawns
as a sinister star ~
   and the dust
               of monsoon skies
 rains soulful sonatas,
     while mellifluous mists
             merge with silence,
 to paint
   a porcelain portrait
         that feels like forever ~
not merely
    a picturesque prison,
 but a place that houses love,
       beyond uncertainties
            framed in fear…

    but now we meet and muse
  in the realm of garnet gravels,
      a dream delicately composed
  in roseate reverie
     where this becomes
                 more than a portrait,
   a poem woven with patience,
when heavy is the past
   that 
     pushes, pulls, 
                   presses ~
  while leaves sigh and
  drift through skies of
                        autumnal elegance…

I surrender to your balmy blues
 the ocean-deep devotion.
 I long to devour and remain
  consumed
  amidst the
       boulevard of divine doves
           a field of freedom
                         until every evening
 envelops our thoughts
  with tender teal ~ timelessness
      and soul-prints pulse
               and glimmer
    tracing twilight’s melodies
like silk-laced stars
      spinning through
      the cashmere cadence
           of everlasting Eden…
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Buehler Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 9:05 PM
This exquisite poem has such depth and beauty, Ink! Delighted congratulations on your trophy win! I enjoyed reading every breathtaking line. This is a fave. Best wishes. :)
Seeker Avatar
April 4, 2026 at 7:46 PM
Oh wow! I wonder how I nearly missed to be touched by this exquisite masterpiece. A trophy winner too! Thanks for sharing, IE, much love.
Brul Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 12:05 PM
Wow! Cashmere cadence! What an unforgettable image you created here. I have no words! Congratulations on a well deserved trophy win! Keep spilling indelible ink! ^____^JCB
G  Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 11:40 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved trophy win Ink!
Liguori Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 11:32 AM
Congrats on your placement Ink.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 11:18 AM
Lovely lines and alliteration! Sinister stars, monsoon skies, soulful sonatas…splendid. Congrats on first place IE!
Jones Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 11:10 AM
Your gift of word has no limits! Congratulations dearest Inky on your top win!
Bordner Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 1:02 PM
A galaxy of generous and ingenius emtions color your face with galactic tones of spirit splendor, life alive with love illumines motions expressing equations of tear and sparkle crafted from carefully kissed adaptations seeking extentions into the nerves of new breaths bequeathed from the drumbeats of God's dreams...J.A.B.
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 3:05 PM
You have found real meaning in a Chagall, I can only think of one other person that does this with ease too lol? An absurdist painting was never going to stop your mind running amok, you even found a boulevard of divine doves, what beautiful imagery in that one line alone, super Ekphrasis, cheers David
Alhemaidy Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 2:35 PM
So enjoyed read!
G  Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 2:02 PM
Ahh Ink you named it in "that feels like forever"- leaning right into romanticism! Absolutely beautiful in this full on immersion write - I call it for the win! Love it!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 11:24 AM
You paint a marvellous vista, with words that make a heart shine. I surrender to your balmy blues, as you wrote. A magnificent poem, my friend.
Onpaper Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 10:50 AM
relearn the unwritten rhythm, lost in the gravity of your gossamer gaze, oooo .. dust of monsoon skies rains soulful sonatas, while mellifluous mists merge with silence,.. love these alliterations papii.,, leaves sigh and drift through skies of autumnal elegance…the sheer beauty you paint out of a painting papi!!! This piece is an absolute masterpiece!!!! The perfect pair for a gorgeous painting!.
Cunningham Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 10:28 AM
Beautiful interpretation of the painting IE, You and LG are the experts writing these. I love paintings but you both get into the heart and soul of them. Tom
Liguori Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 9:24 AM
‘tracing twilight’s melodies like silk-laced stars spinning through the cashmere cadence of everlasting Eden’. These words are captivating. How do you do it?!? That is… write so beautifully. Nice job Ink.
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