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County Fair

He said you know today will be a day we can spare so We’re going down to the county fair So I’m happily calling off work just Because lately my boss has been a jerk And I need some fresh air And I know that hot, hot sun will get to us some But I am not in a hurry today Let’s ride the Ferris wheel, the gravity spinning wheel, And we will relax and just chill I know we will stroll around the whole fair grounds Until we have made our way all around And that is okay with me Then I will buy us lunch After we have ridden all the rides And think it’s enough for a while I know you are going to try to get me to go on one of those crazy dumb rides That turns you upside down while taking you for a ride As your stomach twists and turns in knots, But today that is one this I cannot do But I will watch while you do I know at around 10 pm tonight this county fair will be shutting down And we will have to go home and wait Until the next time they have the county fair in town

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/26/2012 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Lisa's "Unnamed County Fair"contest Jane. Love, Carol
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Jane Kostman
Date: 7/26/2012 10:11:00 AM
Thank you! It sure feels like first place to me! I hope to see you around more jane xoxox
Date: 7/23/2012 5:08:00 PM
congratulations on your win, Jane. Love, Joyce
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Jane Kostman
Date: 7/23/2012 5:12:00 PM
Thank you for your comment on my County fair poem.... jane xoxo
Date: 7/23/2012 3:22:00 AM
Jane congrats on your win, love it..David
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Jane Kostman
Date: 7/23/2012 10:53:00 AM
Thank you glad you enjoyed my poem!
Date: 7/15/2012 8:29:00 PM
You made it funny and fun. Love your poem, Jane. Make me wish there is a fair going on right now :)) Love, Toquyen
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Jane Kostman
Date: 7/16/2012 2:08:00 PM
Thank you for your comment on county fair. I just did it from some experiance at fairs and what it makes me feel....wanted to enter that contest... see you around ane

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