Countryside Waltz

As the wind songs play,
Ivory clouds take the lead:
Dancing with the hills.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 4:35 AM
And........a beautiful waltz it is. Thank you Raul. Love, Carol
Chircop Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 10:03 PM
each verse a fav. to my fav Raul,i feel this Haiku,nature can be so romantic.i love this countryside walts.what a beauty--Charma-(to my favs)
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October 6, 2009 at 5:04 PM
What a wonderful use of personification and imagery for an artistic view. This haiku has me smiling. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 2:07 PM
Those beautiful clouds light and fluffy as ivory soap. Nicely done Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
Gorelick Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 12:43 PM
Reminds me of The Sopund of Music...another great one Raul.BG
Richards Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 12:38 PM
What a joyful poem!! Puts a smile on our faces! ~ Carrie
Harper Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 12:15 PM
Hey man I Love the "ivory clouds" thing.... nice write
Owens Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 12:13 PM
I love it!!! Thanks so much..Will probably be asking advice on others if you don't mind. thanks again....Marty
Fraser Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 11:38 AM
Beautiful Raul, my oh my - you sure know how to paint a picture with so words >> James
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