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Countryside Waltz

As the wind songs play, Ivory clouds take the lead: Dancing with the hills.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/7/2009 4:35:00 AM
And........a beautiful waltz it is. Thank you Raul. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/6/2009 10:03:00 PM
each verse a fav. to my fav Raul,i feel this Haiku,nature can be so romantic.i love this countryside walts.what a beauty--Charma-(to my favs)
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Date: 10/6/2009 5:04:00 PM
What a wonderful use of personification and imagery for an artistic view. This haiku has me smiling. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
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Date: 10/6/2009 2:07:00 PM
Those beautiful clouds light and fluffy as ivory soap. Nicely done Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/6/2009 12:43:00 PM
Reminds me of The Sopund of Music...another great one Raul.BG
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Date: 10/6/2009 12:38:00 PM
What a joyful poem!! Puts a smile on our faces! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/6/2009 12:15:00 PM
Hey man I Love the "ivory clouds" thing.... nice write
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Date: 10/6/2009 12:13:00 PM
I love it!!! Thanks so much..Will probably be asking advice on others if you don't mind. thanks again....Marty
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Date: 10/6/2009 11:38:00 AM
Beautiful Raul, my oh my - you sure know how to paint a picture with so words >> James
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