Country's Conscience

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1963 By then "we" knew Our country's leaders knew (Before that, really - the intelligence was clear) We were in a war we could never win ... More money, more resources, more troops kept going Billions and billions of taxpayer dollars Given almost freely and continuously to a lost cause President-after-president, leader-after-leader Supported the effort that they knew was inane, futile All for the sake of embarrassment Husbands, sons, brothers, friends, fathers Priceless lives given so administrations could say - "Not on MY watch! I will not risk failure!" "Let the next POTUS pull out and be called the loser!" Countless families torn asunder For an effort that was lost before it had begun Literally. I pray ... Every night I pray That they did NOT sleep well ... ever And that EVERY lost soul that died under their watch Is waiting before the Pearly gates to greet them And ask them the question ... Why?!?

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Daniel Turner

Date: 5/11/2018 11:09:00 AM

Why indeed? In a short answer, MONEY. Everything has to do with money. Another great write, Greg.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/11/2018 6:53:00 PM

You are so right, My Friend - it is what spins the world, sadly, and we must counter it with love and kindness, not MORE hatred. Many thanks, My Friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/11/2018 2:02:00 AM

Every time I turn on the TV there is some conflict going on somewhere. But now it has got to a point where it has become the norm. What a state our world is in. Tom

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/11/2018 6:52:00 PM

It's very sad, Tom ... I hold out hope for humanity, but it's VERY hard to do these days, surrounded by hatred and violence. Blessings, Friend.

Carole Duet

Date: 5/11/2018 12:40:00 AM

Wow, Greg! You hit the nail on the head. I totally agree and yet here we are in never-ending war all over the globe...in my opinion, more to the benefit of the military industrial complex than to the benefit of the people. Great, great poem...and a fave for sure.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/30/2018 7:55:00 PM

Thank you so much, Carol, this means a lot to me. I keep leaving a thank-you here and it keeps disappearing, and I have no idea why, but I hope you know that I am very thankful for every kindness you show to me and my work! Blessings, friend! :-) <3