Country Swim

.              shoes on river bank
                        best friends visit Sugar Creek
                                Sunday afternoon

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Krista Kurth

September 18, 2009 at 12:37 PM

Abe, thanks for prolonging the feeling of summer for me today. All the best, Krista

Joshua Lacey

September 16, 2009 at 4:24 PM

sounds like warm friendship

Doris Culverhouse

September 16, 2009 at 7:02 AM

those are the best times when you are young just hanging out.

James Marshall Goff

September 15, 2009 at 5:51 PM

picturesque! nice!...jim

Moonbee Canady

September 15, 2009 at 4:42 PM

Am I Watching The New Huckleberry Finn ? What a Moment... Very Nice Poem MoonBee

Brian Strand

September 15, 2009 at 12:03 AM

Very evocative Abe,great visual 'spaces' style poetry.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Raul Moreno

September 14, 2009 at 2:05 PM

Nice work, I write poetry at this same creek...Raul

James Fraser

September 14, 2009 at 1:50 PM

Lovely images of friends enjoying the freedom of fun, wonderful - and thank you for my evening of joy reading your incredible poems, well worth the shift if i may say so. Every so often i just pick a name and read as much as i can if not them all, thank you again>>James

Savannah Rose Harper

September 14, 2009 at 1:13 PM

buh reminds me of when i swim in muddy rivers.... lost 17 pairs of shoes that way

Carolyn Devonshire

September 14, 2009 at 12:58 PM

Ah, Abe, a delightful description of a refreshing way to spend a warm Sunday afternoon. Excellent! Love, carolyn

Robin L. Gass

September 14, 2009 at 12:44 PM

Love the images in this heartwarming Senyru, Abe. It does sound like a great way to spend a Sunday afternoon, kid or grownup! Love, Robin

September 14, 2009 at 12:00 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Oh for the young carefree days. Nice use of alliteration. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

September 14, 2009 at 11:13 AM

Those were the days! Great poem that brings back memories of visits to the country... before I moved to the country and found peace! Very nice Senryu, Abe. And thanks from the Soupers for your thoughtful comment on School Days. There will be more to come!!! It was fun... as you well know from the poem "The Love of Fine Art." in which you contributed to make another super Souper poem! Thanks! and love to you. Love to you. Dane

Carrie Richards

September 14, 2009 at 11:11 AM

Just down the road from us....is a our own Dibble Creek..... Sugar Creek/Dibble Creek....what happy places to spend a Sunday afternoon !! Love this happy poem! Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 14, 2009 at 10:52 AM

Hope you behaved yourself Abe. Splendid write. Love, Carol

Nadia Shahwan

September 14, 2009 at 9:54 AM

Sweet senryu.

Charmaine Chircop

September 14, 2009 at 9:11 AM

thats a nice senryu about bestfriends...visiting the country..how wonderful when bestfriends are there for each other enjoying the fun together,sharing their lives,sorrows and always be good and offer respect to each other--nice senryu-Charma