Country Autumn Day

The crowns of the field are the bushes about Superior greens and yellows that follow From a window these plants come to life and sprout The pond is visible located below The house is open, the air comes in at will Mighty is the sky, beauty that fits the bill The air is crisp, the brush is changing color Feel of autumn is here just like a Renoir
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horne Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 5:09 PM
awesome write - and the last line is just so clever
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 10:27 PM
That's a cool way to do a Rispetto. as a tribute to a season instead of a person! Love how you made it like a renoir!
Jones Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 8:31 PM
I love to open the windows and let the fresh air come in....wonderful Russell...
Kendrick Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments about the work and the events of the last few days had empathy...Sara
Trifiatis Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Your writing Russell has followed the beauty of Autumn! Just majestic! Renoir could not compete with your writing! Thank you for sharing!
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 1:40 PM
- A really lovely poem Russell ..... but hope the time will go slowly until autumn - Now I'm ready for spring and summer! - Have a pleasant weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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April 20, 2013 at 8:06 AM
Oh no what happened to summer?? Oh where oh where is my summer. Jokes aside, great poem Russell.
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