Country Air

Dogs barking in the front yard
Tractor made of steel
Blades of grass
Growing green
Looking out the kitchen window 
Pulled the curtains back
Dirt road by the house
They always drive to fast
Dumpster cross the road
A corner made of trash
Can’t live here in this place
Daddy says so
Willie on the radio
I guess it’s time to go

Seventeen and not so sweet
Poverty my destiny
A child on my hip
Never new a man too smart
But I had feelings
That wouldn’t say no
Working at the filling station
Out on the interstate
Just washing windows
And counting out of state plates
Makes me happy
Don’t pay the bills

Telephone poles 
And wired fences
All along the way
Driving fast on a dirt road
Is all I have
Wind in my hair
Baby in the back seat
Smiling at the world
This old world seems so mean
Pushing hard to just to breath
I’ll give it all away
For a breath of country air.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Breidenthal Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 1:31 AM
Sweet verse! I enjoyed reading this one a lot. :) Always, Laura
Kilmer Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 11:21 PM
As always many thanks! I about to visit your page and see what you have been up to... :) ~Kilmer
Andresen Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 8:07 AM
- I had my childhood in the country ...... free paradise for both children and adults ... - A very well written poem Stephen. - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kilmer Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Thank you Anne Lise. By the way I spent 4 years in Norway and know the country very well. You live in a paradise.
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November 22, 2013 at 8:44 PM
Stephen, I love the country air, and one day hopefully before I grow old.. I will enjoy that country air again.. i think you did well in describing the country life... xox...Linda
Kilmer Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Nothing better than country air. Thanks Linda.
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