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Country Air

Dogs barking in the front yard Tractor made of steel Blades of grass Growing green Looking out the kitchen window Pulled the curtains back Dirt road by the house They always drive to fast Dumpster cross the road A corner made of trash Can’t live here in this place Daddy says so Willie on the radio I guess it’s time to go Seventeen and not so sweet Poverty my destiny A child on my hip Never new a man too smart But I had feelings That wouldn’t say no Working at the filling station Out on the interstate Just washing windows And counting out of state plates Makes me happy Don’t pay the bills Telephone poles And wired fences All along the way Driving fast on a dirt road Is all I have Wind in my hair Baby in the back seat Smiling at the world This old world seems so mean Pushing hard to just to breath I’ll give it all away For a breath of country air.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/26/2013 1:31:00 AM
Sweet verse! I enjoyed reading this one a lot. :) Always, Laura
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 12/3/2013 11:21:00 PM
As always many thanks! I about to visit your page and see what you have been up to... :) ~Kilmer
Date: 11/23/2013 8:07:00 AM
- I had my childhood in the country ...... free paradise for both children and adults ... - A very well written poem Stephen. - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 11/24/2013 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise. By the way I spent 4 years in Norway and know the country very well. You live in a paradise.
Date: 11/22/2013 8:44:00 PM
Stephen, I love the country air, and one day hopefully before I grow old.. I will enjoy that country air again.. i think you did well in describing the country life... xox...Linda
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 11/24/2013 5:27:00 PM
Nothing better than country air. Thanks Linda.

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