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Countless Life

1, 2, 3 Down, and counting life Three, two...one

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Chuck Novotny

Date: 4/2/2012 2:45:00 PM

Brilliant! The use of numbers in the first line invokes an image of the impatience of youth, while spelling them out in the last suggest a desire to spend more time. I hope I got that right. Regardless, this has been added to my favorites list. - Chuck

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/2/2012 4:31:00 PM

Glad you caught that! :) And thanks! -Laura

Don Johnson

Date: 3/6/2012 5:53:00 PM

living loving, then the leaving, passing through deaths back door, different colors same ol speaker, never dead 4 nevermore. thanks Laura Breidenthal