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Counting Dimes

Counting dimes in the coffee shop
dangling earrings peeling orange
rinds, stuffing her mouth sitting on
her behind.

She had guts in her soul enough
to face the sun and what she had
done.  Her tattoo came to life.
Loosening her hair, she kicked the
garbage can.  Shaking bells on her 
toes, she traveled the land.  Sand
neath her sandals.

Face up to the moon stirring in the 
brine, it was her season to shine.
Who else did she know who had 
become undone.  She pines, she
whines.  The geese flew southward.  

No one else gets to walk into 
someone's life and then promptly
walk out!

Counting dimes, the church bells pealed;
golden braids she made with her hands,
strand by strand.  Hand in hand, in prime
time;  shook off her golden rings letting
them stew in the brine.

Ominous signs told her it was her season
to shine.  Rolling to the sea, rolling to the
sea.  That's what she could be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/18/2011 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Gisele. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/7/2011 5:39:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme ...hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... happy weekend...
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