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Writing a Haiku Try not to Obsess about Syllable counting

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Date: 10/17/2024 8:33:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/18/2016 1:09:00 PM
BRENDAN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 2/18/2016 1:26:00 PM
Hi LINDA, thanks for your lovely comments. My muse has disappeared lately, but your comment has led me to read my own poems again - maybe it'll spark me into writing more. Thank you, Love Brendan :-)
Date: 12/6/2015 1:17:00 PM
BRENDAN, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 7/23/2015 7:30:00 PM
That is hard to do, those silly syllables, nicely done :)
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 7/28/2015 4:45:00 AM
I saw what you did there :-) Sorry, I thought I'd replied to your comment earlier.
Date: 7/22/2015 5:54:00 AM
Good one, made me titter. My fingers have never had so much exercise. Kind regards, Ian
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 7/22/2015 5:56:00 AM
Cheers Ian - appreciate the comment. My first Haiku :) Regards, Brendan

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