Counting

Writing a Haiku
           Try not to Obsess about
                Syllable counting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
October 17, 2024 at 8:33 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 18, 2016 at 1:09 PM
BRENDAN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Osborne Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 1:26 PM
Hi LINDA, thanks for your lovely comments. My muse has disappeared lately, but your comment has led me to read my own poems again - maybe it'll spark me into writing more. Thank you, Love Brendan :-)
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December 6, 2015 at 1:17 PM
BRENDAN, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**
Nance Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 7:30 PM
That is hard to do, those silly syllables, nicely done :)
Osborne Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 4:45 AM
I saw what you did there :-) Sorry, I thought I'd replied to your comment earlier.
Jones Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 5:54 AM
Good one, made me titter. My fingers have never had so much exercise. Kind regards, Ian
Osborne Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 5:56 AM
Cheers Ian - appreciate the comment. My first Haiku :) Regards, Brendan
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