Counting

My mother counted meatballs
As she plunked them in the pot.
When I exercise, I count each rep
So I know what is what.

We’ve been told to count our blessings
And, of course, to count the change.
Counting sheep to an insomniac
Would surely not seem strange.

A dieter counts calories.
(For that, please count me out.)
A KO’d boxer hears the count
And knows he’s lost, no doubt.

A countdown at a launch pad
Lets us know that blast off’s near
And the thought that counts reminds us
What we want might not appear.

If you’re counting on an ending
To this little counting spree
Then don’t worry since you know that you
Can always count on me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/14/2020 1:53:00 PM
So Cute. I love your line, "(For that, please count me out.)." Guess we really do count a lot without knowing it. So count this poem as another blessing. Enjoy your day....................
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Date: 8/6/2020 11:30:00 AM
Wonderful 'counting off' of all the ways we use counting. Love all your clever and charming examples. Very creative.
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Date: 8/5/2020 8:16:00 PM
Kept thinking: Now what would Sesame Street's 'Count' say about this line or that line! Ilene, you made this one count! Enjoyed, and thank you, Gershon
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Date: 8/5/2020 2:49:00 PM
Such a creative poem--with an especially charming ending, Ilene. Janice
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Date: 8/5/2020 1:12:00 PM
Another winner, and we do count on you for that! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 8/5/2020 11:00:00 AM
Haha good one Ilene, thankfully I counted on admin to banish the gremlins, so far so good. Tom
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Date: 8/5/2020 10:16:00 AM
aww Ilene, I know I can always count on you for an entertaining rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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