Counterfeit Smiles

Losing hope before love starts, betrayal corrupts the soul. And in freshly broken hearts, confusion exacts a toll. Gathering clouds, sense your mood, crying, dribbling drops of rain. And suddenly, a storm's brewed, as they weep for all your pain. When the sun won't share its light, your spirit struggles to cope. And haunts the shadows of Night; where counterfeit smiles sell hope. Fear and doubt dominate dreams, for love is nowhere in sight. And fueled by nightmare screams; depression turns off the light. Fond memories add their weight, to balance the scales of truth. Yet, a heart broken by fate, sheds the innocence of youth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Strong lines "For a heart broken by fate loses innocence of youth."
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Thanks Line, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 3:00 AM
A sad reality Emile. Your imagery is divine. With love the heart is always at risk of being broken. Beautiful! ; )
Pinet Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Please read my last poem, Thank you Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Thanks Connie, as always I appreciate your comments. Emile
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 4:33 PM
beautiful yet such sad imagery Emile. I especially love the second stanza:-) hugs Jan xx7
Pinet Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 1:12 PM
Thanks Jan, I value your input and your support. Emile.
Manassian Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 3:49 PM
Very sad, my dear...very sad. counterfeit smiles can only bring pain. Much to ponder.
Pinet Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 11:10 AM
Please read my last poem, Thank you Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Thanks Eileen, I appreciate your support. Emile.
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