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Counterfeit Smiles

Losing love before love starts; confusion exacts a toll. And in freshly broken hearts, delusion corrupts the soul. Gathering clouds, sense your mood, crying misty drops of rain. And suddenly, a storm's brewed; as they weep for all your pain. When the sun won't share its light, your spirit struggles to cope. And haunts the shadows of night; where counterfeit smiles sell hope. Fear and guilt dominate dreams; when love is nowhere in sight. And fueling nightmare screams; depression turns off the light. Memories add little weight to balance the scales of truth. For a heart broken by fate; lost the innocence of youth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 3/17/2018 1:30:00 PM
Strong lines "For a heart broken by fate loses innocence of youth."
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/12/2016 3:00:00 AM
A sad reality Emile. Your imagery is divine. With love the heart is always at risk of being broken. Beautiful! ; )
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/12/2016 11:09:00 AM
Please read my last poem, Thank you Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/12/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Connie, as always I appreciate your comments. Emile
Date: 3/10/2016 4:33:00 PM
beautiful yet such sad imagery Emile. I especially love the second stanza:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/11/2016 1:12:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I value your input and your support. Emile.
Date: 3/10/2016 3:49:00 PM
Very sad, my dear...very sad. counterfeit smiles can only bring pain. Much to ponder.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/12/2016 11:10:00 AM
Please read my last poem, Thank you Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/10/2016 4:29:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, I appreciate your support. Emile.
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