Kim Rodrigues Poet Haiku

counterclockwise breeze

                                        counterclockwise breeze
the fringe of Fall                          inside-out
                                             static headspace

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Paige Hind August 10, 2025 at 4:29 PM Your muse is all the time, overtime, LOL :) a wonderfully creative "headspace" Kim Rodrigues August 10, 2025 at 4:46 PM It comes and goes…sometimes I feel on fire, other times, ash… I guess we all go through that! Hugs ~ Kim

Jan Allison August 9, 2025 at 5:21 PM brr i feel a chill in the air just reading this Kim! hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues August 9, 2025 at 9:16 PM Right?! Hugs ~ Kim

sara Etgen-Baker August 8, 2025 at 4:21 PM awesome structure and image! A counterclockwise breeze...so apropos! enjoy your evening, Sara Kim Rodrigues August 9, 2025 at 5:20 AM So glad you like this one! I had fun writing it.

Joseph P. DiMino August 8, 2025 at 8:55 AM Yep, time to start wearing warmer garments. The good news is, we made to another one. Great little write. Blessings. Kim Rodrigues August 8, 2025 at 9:22 AM I’m just glad for the heat wave to be at bay! Nicer in low 80 degrees F. and even getting into high 60’s. I will take it!