Count Your Blessings

I have trouble sleeping
I am in considerable pain
I twist and turn, twist and turn
And twist and turn again
My back feels like it's breaking
My legs both have a twitch
My stomach is uncomfortable
Now I have a stitch
A stitch in time saves nine
I've read
Somewhere back in time 
I can't remember who wrote it
Perhaps they could use mine
My Husband is sleeping
Comfortable and snug
I'll get up for a cup of tea
And settle for a mug
I sit down by myself
Unsettled and forlorn
That healthy young woman
Of yesterday
Has well and truly gone
Who is that old woman
Miserable and blue
I should count my blessings
It won't take very long
At the moment I have only two
One that I am still alive
And have lived longer than some
Two, my aching limbs are not hurting
Everything is numb
I must try to stop thinking
Dwelling on my ills
I'll take my medication
And a dozen coloured pills
Even though I'm sure that
They give me a pain in the head
I'll swallow this last pill
Then go off to bed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/7/2020 1:17:00 AM
Good one.. The thoughts and the flow.. Is it fantasy or real? Takecare..
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/7/2020 3:33:00 AM
Get well soon.. i will send you my prayers with the wind, coz i'm God's Gracious butterfly.. Never mind.. I was just trying to scratch a poem for the Acrostic contest.. Keep on writing..
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 1/7/2020 3:07:00 AM
Real, Feeling sorry for myself which I don't need to do I should count my blessings as I am 82 So I sat down to write to see if The restlessness would cease To stop the silly nonsense and to find some inner peace I never thought that anyone would think the poem true Then not everyone is as astute as you Thank -you for your comments that I look forward to I wish there were more people in the world that were caring Just Like You
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