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Count Your Blessings

I have trouble sleeping I am in considerable pain I twist and turn, twist and turn And twist and turn again My back feels like it's breaking My legs both have a twitch My stomach is uncomfortable Now I have a stitch A stitch in time saves nine I've read Somewhere back in time I can't remember who wrote it Perhaps they could use mine My Husband is sleeping Comfortable and snug I'll get up for a cup of tea And settle for a mug I sit down by myself Unsettled and forlorn That healthy young woman Of yesterday Has well and truly gone Who is that old woman Miserable and blue I should count my blessings It won't take very long At the moment I have only two One that I am still alive And have lived longer than some Two, my aching limbs are not hurting Everything is numb I must try to stop thinking Dwelling on my ills I'll take my medication And a dozen coloured pills Even though I'm sure that They give me a pain in the head I'll swallow this last pill Then go off to bed

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Date: 1/7/2020 1:17:00 AM
Good one.. The thoughts and the flow.. Is it fantasy or real? Takecare..
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/7/2020 3:33:00 AM
Get well soon.. i will send you my prayers with the wind, coz i'm God's Gracious butterfly.. Never mind.. I was just trying to scratch a poem for the Acrostic contest.. Keep on writing..
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 1/7/2020 3:07:00 AM
Real, Feeling sorry for myself which I don't need to do I should count my blessings as I am 82 So I sat down to write to see if The restlessness would cease To stop the silly nonsense and to find some inner peace I never thought that anyone would think the poem true Then not everyone is as astute as you Thank -you for your comments that I look forward to I wish there were more people in the world that were caring Just Like You

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