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Couldn'T Help Smirkin'

Found a new restaurant called The Lion and Firkin Was quite impressed, when finished I was smirkin' The girlies were clad In short skirts of green plaid Delightful as a shamrock, their bottoms were flirtin' © Jack Ellison 2015

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/24/2015 7:59:00 PM

G'day Jack... ha-ha etc. Tell me, have you got a poem that involves droolin' Jack? I dare say that you were doing a bit of that when penning this limerick. Regards - Lindsay

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/24/2015 9:11:00 PM

YUP! An Irish Pub so the "Top 'O the morning to ya!" I shall write one about drooling... should be easy! LOL

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/24/2015 1:25:00 PM

Between you and John I now where to get a smile. When I read through the second time, I could hear it in my husbands voice...LOL. ;-) ~jan

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/24/2015 9:08:00 PM

John and I have just become hard fast friend for obvious reason! We're both a wee bit over the edge! LOL Huggsies, Jack xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/24/2015 11:03:00 AM

Here it's called the twisted kilt... The girlies wear plaid without guilt... No one is said... As they oggle those plaids... Someone a profitable business has built! REALLY! Honest!... It's doing gun busters just like 'Hooters' did!

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/24/2015 11:56:00 AM

It surely can draw in the male customers!!! I know for certainty, I'll be back, basically because of the food! LOL xxx

Tammy Reams

Date: 3/24/2015 8:35:00 AM

Good morning Jack. Ready for my coffee and some fun humor with your poems. Love this! Now to read the next one.

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/24/2015 11:53:00 AM

You are very kind my dearest Tammy! Can always count on you to boost my spiries! You're a sweetie! Huggsies, Jack xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2015 7:41:00 AM

ha ha ha love it jack:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/24/2015 8:03:00 AM

They sure know how to keep us coming back... at least us guys! LOL Hugs, Jack xxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/24/2015 6:39:00 AM

I can almost imagine your smirk...:) This looks like a "for the boys" lim... oh, uh, Jack? DID you EVEN TASTE your food? :) My first smile from PS tonight...Thank you, Master of Mayhem...:) Kim

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/24/2015 6:42:00 AM

You put a GREAT BIG SMILE on MY kisser, dear sweet Kim!!! Food??? I THINK we ate! LOL Sleet tight my dear Kim lady!!! Love and hugs, Wacko Jacko xxx